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Kingfisher

I sat down by the river bank And watched the water flow, The rapids effervescing Meanders running slow, Then past the corner of my eye A flash of colour sped, The kingfisher in his splendour Hunts the river bed. Entry for CONTEST 580,any form,any theme Up to max of 8(E I G H T ) lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand. 25/3/19 Placed 3rd.

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Date: 3/26/2019 9:15:00 AM
Lovely, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/26/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 3/26/2019 8:56:00 AM
Beautifully written Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/26/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. :)
Date: 3/26/2019 6:05:00 AM
Had to "Fav" this one; great imagery; vibrant poem; I can see it. A great morning read.
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/26/2019 6:41:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 3/25/2019 7:38:00 PM
G'day Gary … thanks for reminding me on these little darts of colour who rarely miss their mark - Lindsay
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/26/2019 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. :)
Date: 3/25/2019 6:16:00 PM
superb imagery Gary I have not seen one for many many years they are such stunning birds:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/25/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Jan, we have a spot where we watch them fishing, it is delightful to see. :)

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