King Sun and Goddess Sea

One summer day, enraptured by the Goddess Sea, King Sun shone down with all his might; most splendidly he moved the Goddess, for she rippled laughingly a shimmering reply to Sun in azure sky, and while reflecting that same hue where King Sun dwelt, her turquoise ripples lengthened, for the goddess felt herself now rising up with joy. Wave after wave was leaping, frothing. . . as King Sun more strongly gave his final rays to her. Then he descended low that he might kiss the lovely Sea on earth below - to kiss her soon before the last day’s shadows fell, and so he touched her where she’d let her body swell. With yellow gold, his final glow, he bathed her face, but when the night arrived with sable colored lace to drape the goddess, Sun had vanished from all sight; below Sea’s depth he’d sunk - to love her through the night. For Suz's "Let's Be Open" poetry contest and now for PD's Anything Goes Contest
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Liwayway Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 7:39 AM
A very beautiful piece. I like it, so very creative. Great poet indeed. Congratulations for winning the top friend Andrea ;) ;) cheers! hugs ;)
J.T. Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 12:35 PM
This is really good. Congratulations on winning top spot -JT
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Good win in PD's comp. Love the imagery, although it appears I was thinking of a different swell ??.
Ryerson Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:10 PM
WOW my friend! You have taken the theme of nature and turned it into something sensual and erotic...LOVE the concluding 4 lines especially and I can't help but wonder if they had any offspring? That could be another series of poems! Congrats on your 1st place win - Tim.....PS: I see that you are a member of 'Whispers' too? I read your St. Paddy's Day poem and left a comment - Tim
Rodgers Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Lovely, congrats on your win
Watson Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 2:55 PM
Positively erotic Andrea , Loved it .
Stephens Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Hi, Congrats on your win Andrea. Superlative imagery and enjoyable read. Regards Theresa xx
Horsch Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 11:10 AM
I love the Idea of this poem. the poem is just wonderful. Congrats on your win Andrea......Hugs.......Roger
Parker Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:53 AM
a nice take on the sun and sea, how am I going to catch up if you keep winning? nice win my friend, congratulations
Callus Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Congrats on first placing Andrea. Personification at its best. One of my favs. // paul
May Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Great poem Andrea...Congrats on a great win
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Congrats Andrea !! Well deserved top win! Sun and sea meeting very well written !!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Sensual in all the right ways. Congratulations.
Smith Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:17 AM
What a beautiful take on love Andrea. Congratulations on the win
Goswami Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 2:46 AM
Beautiful and wonderful...Great work...Truly I have seen your portrait . Rhythm of love...Rhythm of human life...Best wishes from my heart...Sandip
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, andrea
Walker  Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Beautiful Andrea... Congratulations - first place - :)... Verlena
A   Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 12:15 AM
my kind of poem..... CONGRATULATIONS.... THANK YOU ANDREA.... XOX....LINDA
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Congrats on your win, I really enjoyed reading your poem, a lovely write indeed! blessings, Stacey
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 7:43 AM
congratulations on your win Andy this is where I am used to seeing you ..no 1 xx
Anglesey Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 8:52 PM
The Sun making love to the Sea...wow wow wow... brilliant verse and glowing imagery. Congrats :)
Rain Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 1:35 PM
This is why you are number 1 poet of last year !! Congratulations deserved on this win.
A  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 1:11 PM
wow! Andrea, breathtaking. Love the win *Hugs* SKAT
Liwayway Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 12:03 PM
Superb piece! Congratulations on your win friend Andrea :) Cheers!!
Gopela Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 3:07 AM
So beautiful! Congrats, Andrea! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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