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King Crab

The Moonlit shadows swept across the beach The waves in the distance seem so out of reach A beautiful sand castle stood all alone A marvelous sight of seashells, gems, and stone Out from a rock crawled a little crab His current surroundings were a bit drab To the left of his rock he saw such a sight He looked up and down and was wowwed by the height When he saw the castle all covered in bling He crossed the mote and was instantly king

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2011 7:04:00 PM
thank you for the comments :) and thank you for welcoming me to the community!
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:56:00 PM
Very profound expressions, Amanda
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:18:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed your most enjoyable creative poetry tonight.. wonderful charming words to share luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:15:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Amanda. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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