King Crab

The Moonlit shadows swept across the beach
The waves in the distance seem so out of reach
A beautiful sand castle stood all alone
A marvelous sight of seashells, gems, and stone
Out from a rock crawled a little crab
His current surroundings were a bit drab
To the left of his rock he saw such a sight
He looked up and down and was wowwed by the height
When he saw the castle all covered in bling
He crossed the mote and was instantly king
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hennessey Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:04 PM
thank you for the comments :) and thank you for welcoming me to the community!
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:56 PM
Very profound expressions, Amanda
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June 30, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed your most enjoyable creative poetry tonight.. wonderful charming words to share luv..
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June 30, 2011 at 12:15 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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June 30, 2011 at 8:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Amanda. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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