Kindness

It can be too sweet.
Kindness can numb the tongue and irritate.
It can be too sweet,
but it can keep one from claiming defeat.
Causing the disinclined to suffocate,
or keeping locked away death’s early gate;
it can be too sweet.











Kindness Rondelets Contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 19, 2012 at 10:13 PM
brittany, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:06 AM
a very interesting one. Uniquely done.congrats on the win.
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December 15, 2012 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations on your win Brittany love xx
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Nawww KINDNESS is always good! ;)Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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