Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Kimo

Kimo Therapy

You lived the life the way you liked, carefree
Like smoking you did not quit
Your lungs are now fighting.

You have the courage to face the future
With the healing touch of God
You’ll win the bleak battle.

With undaunted hope you’ll cross the dark night
Reach the bright horizon where
A new dawn waits for you.

July 13, 2018
Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com
(This is for my brother-in-law who is fighting lung cancer)

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Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2018 at 4:39 PM I like how you compared the same fighting spirit that kept smoking to the spirit that will now fight the disease it caused. Great message. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 16, 2018 at 2:35 AM Thank you, Andrea for your visit and for catching the spirit behind the poem

Anne-Lise Andresen July 13, 2018 at 12:39 PM - Great written for your brother-in-law, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy July 15, 2018 at 12:52 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Subimal Sinha-Roy July 15, 2018 at 12:52 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise.