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You lived the life the way you liked, carefree
Like smoking you did not quit
Your lungs are now fighting.

You have the courage to face the future
With the healing touch of God
You’ll win the bleak battle.

With undaunted hope you’ll cross the dark night
Reach the bright horizon where
A new dawn waits for you.

July 13, 2018
Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com
(This is for my brother-in-law who is fighting lung cancer)
 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/15/2018 4:39:00 PM
I like how you compared the same fighting spirit that kept smoking to the spirit that will now fight the disease it caused. Great message.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea for your visit and for catching the spirit behind the poem
Date: 7/13/2018 12:39:00 PM
- Great written for your brother-in-law, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/15/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/15/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.