Killing Me Again
“KILLING ME AGAIN”
Once again there is none that may see
anguish and hurt deep inside;
With sparkling tears I’m killing my fears
Removing all shame I try to hide
The voices of doubt run their tirade
as they rage shouting their blame;
I’m killing my fears with sparkling tears
Struggling to deal with unceasing pain
He sees me trying to run away
while He watches from above;
With sparkling tears I’m killing my fears
Drenching myself in His grace and love
© Kim van Breda—May 2014
(My first attempt at a “ZaniLa Rhyme”—syllable count 9.7.9.9.
Line three is a repeating internal rhyme with two parts swopped every stanza)
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