David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

Killer Whale Ambush

sea lions crying loud 
       orcas don’t sleep very much ~
            one blubbering mess



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02/05/22

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Kim Rodrigues May 4, 2022 at 6:39 PM Fun and funny too! Congratulations! David Kavanagh May 4, 2022 at 11:39 PM Thank you Kim, just a comic twist on words, as you rightly say, cheers David

Christuraj Alex May 4, 2022 at 7:40 AM Wow! What a beautiful haiku! Congratulations! David Kavanagh May 4, 2022 at 8:10 AM Heya Chris I’m delighted someone gets the picture, your so kind, cheers David