Kids In the Park-Collaboration

{Added to the end of the poem, of Charles Messina, as the last stanza}


Before they head home
They mark the ground with a stone
Of where they left today
To be continued once again


12 August 2018
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Francesca..Congratulations on your win!
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Thank you kindly, Eve. Much appreciated :)
Messina Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Francesca, I love the addition you've added to my poem. Although I would have liked to see it written in the entire poem it is definitely worthy of a placement in my contest. Thank you for entering and Congrats on your win. :) Charlie
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie. Duly noted. Much appreciated :)
Man Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Wonderful conclusion guys!!
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thank very much Lyric man :)
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