Kids

boys
             tussle, roll
          pierce in pace
       toy-cycle in hand
                 lads


written 02-08-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 11:00 AM
boys and their bikes! sweet Light & Love
Horne Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 4:46 PM
lovely write - must try this fun form
A  Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Good morning Jenish, ha boys will be boys... love the poem... SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 5:27 PM
What those little boys can't find to get into can't be thought of..Enjoyed reading your description..Great job with the topic and form..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Nice one! I think it is cute to call them lads!
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:22 AM
- Nice poem, Jenish! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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