Kids

KIDS

Daughter,
For her father,
Completes his short lifelong
List of achievements-without-flaw :
Perfect.


My son :
Independent,
Strong and reliable;
Better  in every way than
Father.

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For Catie Lindsey's  - Traditional Cinquain Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 11:26 PM
a great entry for the contest, and I don't mind what you said about my sunlight poem. I would have used only sun, but the contest called for sunlight! heehee. Luv, Andrea
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April 13, 2011 at 12:02 PM
I admire how highly you regard your children, Syd. Definitely a unique topic for the cinquain contest and it's outstanding in many ways. So much love eminates from your poem. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 10:49 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Syd and I wish you the best in Catie's contest. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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