Sara Chansarkar Poet Verse

Kibitzer

Keeps a foot in all camps
Knows all that goes around
Keg of wisdom he touts 
Keenly lends advice to
Kin and strangers till they
Kick and shut him out. Then
Kaput go his designs 

Written on:03/09/2017

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2017 at 4:16 AM - Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Sara :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman March 13, 2017 at 5:25 PM A unique subject, and you did a great job of depicting it, Sara! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2017 at 7:52 PM Sara. This is really cool, even though I still don't know what a kibitzer is! I think you picked a very original one that nobody else will do! Good job.

Cheryl Hoffman March 9, 2017 at 7:12 PM That poor kibitzer should stop kibitzing so much! Clever write for theme; G/L in the contest! Enjoyed!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2017 at 2:31 PM Fun!

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2017 at 1:20 PM quite unique and a good one at that, sara... win it!..huggs

Tim Smith March 9, 2017 at 12:19 PM Brings a sense of sadness Sara...beautiful work

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 9, 2017 at 10:19 AM Awesome! 7 xomo!

Chris Green March 9, 2017 at 9:49 AM You had me at keg of wisdom and then the sad ending sobered me up. I can see this now and I can feel it. This was excellent.