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Three men arrived here yesterday, got off the ferry and went to a shop to purchase alcohol before they went to their hotel. All of them were wearing face masks which alerted the shop keeper, who reported them to the police. They got taken to prison and up in court by video link today … all got hefty fines and suspended prison sentences as they were ‘key workers’ and had been wearing masks. 

My country Covid free Ferry trip causes gyp Men arrive Then they drive To the shop Where they stop To buy drink Didn’t think They’d done bad… Are they mad! Their downfall Alcohol Contravene Quarantine Stupid fools Broke set rules - NO stopping For shopping! Put in jail With no bail Must conform To OUR norm Our law spurned Lessons learned Cross that line Get HUGE fine 09/29/20

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Date: 10/1/2020 10:58:00 AM
Terrific write Jan, you have a beautiful island, almost like a haven, and glad the police arrested these idiots and heavily fined them. Hope they are tracking them well, can't they kick them off the island as unwanted visitors!!! Hugs and blessings, Jennifesr.
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Date: 10/1/2020 6:37:00 AM
At least the IOM is taking it seriously, idiots here having raves and all sorts. Keep your drawbridge up and shut. Tom
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Date: 10/1/2020 3:05:00 AM
- !!! simple task ~ use the mask !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2020 3:25:00 PM
At least they are keeping track of the fools. Very clever write Jan. Good job!
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Date: 9/30/2020 2:31:00 PM
Your country Covid Free, Sweet Land of Liberty -- It has replaced America! Way to go, Isle of Man and Jan! :) gw
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Date: 9/30/2020 9:25:00 AM
Bully for you AND the people who took action! If only our police were as vigilant! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/30/2020 1:34:00 PM
we HAVE to protect our Island from the idiots who break the rules:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/29/2020 10:08:00 PM
LOve this Jan, the poetry superb, as was the handling of those idiots.
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Date: 9/30/2020 1:33:00 PM
thanks harry:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/29/2020 12:42:00 PM
Interesting write for sure... God bless you
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:49:00 PM
thanks Regina, its totally unbelievable that these guys came from and area that s under lock down and then disobeyed our rules:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 9/29/2020 12:31:00 PM
So many disregard instructions. Pity. ~~
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Date: 9/29/2020 12:35:00 PM
yes but if they get caught they get court :-) hugs jan xx

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