John Beam Poet Haiku

Keeper's Vivid Cove

Corridor of light                                                                                                               
Fiery spring called seaward                                                                                         
From foam to glory

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 23, 2010 at 6:35 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest John. Love, Carol

John Freeman April 22, 2010 at 6:14 PM Congratulations John an awesome proem presentation, a win for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 22, 2010 at 1:58 PM Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and great win for u..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Kim M April 22, 2010 at 1:34 PM Oh! I adore this most elegant version! Every word is fantastic. I especially admire the imagery of "fiery spring called seaward" and "corridor of light". Perfect word choices.

April 22, 2010 at 1:29 PM The scene comes to life through your words. Congratulations on placing third in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your big honor. Karen

Raul Moreno April 22, 2010 at 12:45 PM John, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Dr.Ram Mehta April 21, 2010 at 9:52 PM A fine haiku with nice images