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Keeper of Omen

Winter grates as the blackbird roams through frosted limbs of trees... and shrills; while moon hides from a brooding night its call, the threadbare air, refills. My eyes mirror this drowning hymn while breaths cry out to agonize. Deep within a starless backdrop iced feathers cause anguish to rise. And ebon wings defrock my mind embedding stains on bleak frontier; keeper of omen dares to haunt as love’s requiem awaits here. Though wrapping the light from its crawl, snowflakes drop on my pallid face till raven foul the morning breaks ; in dawn’s arms I lose fate’s embrace. ................... Kelly Deschler's The Raven 9/27/2014

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Date: 10/14/2014 8:39:00 AM
It is your art,congrats Nette.
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Date: 10/13/2014 9:50:00 PM
Very suggestive title, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:35:00 PM
I really enjoyed the haunting atmosphere that this poem creates. This was so elegant and beautifully written! Congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:44:00 AM
Very glad to have found this one my friend. Adding this jewel to my fav list here and thanks for it.. A SUPER solid 7 it is ..
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:49:00 PM
With every poem, you captivate with a bit of magic. This I have wanted to reread more than once! Great words and images!
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:19:00 AM
You create a mysterious, almost mocking image of a scene that gives me chills. Fantastic use of words and metaphors, Nette, placed where they need to give impact!
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Date: 9/28/2014 11:54:00 AM
So eloquently penned, Nette. You create mood with such stunning imagery.
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Date: 9/28/2014 10:21:00 AM
Classic poetry, my friend! Dreamy sequence of longing...thanks for stopping by...yes...honesty was my true north in my love poem...not a subject i share often...as my personal life blossoms once more...i am aware of my feelings...jimbo
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:21:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:20:00 AM
Nette, I love your work here very much. Your diction, tone, pitch and imagery all synchronize themselves into a most marvelous and exquisite result. Your words literally transport the reader in person to this scene/vision you are portraying. Enjoyed It!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:50:00 AM
I love words and this poem dear Nette is why I love poetry, you are such an inspiration. Thanks for sharing your gift. Alofas, Tiaua.
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:44:00 AM
Wow quite an impressive write Nette!
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:51:00 AM
very beautifully penned dear friend excellent piece
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:39:00 AM
Wow, this is a very impressive piece Nette. I could feel some shades of Mister Poe. Brilliant!
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:36:00 AM
Wow. Deep. I read this three time and still am not in tune with what it means. Beautiful language though. M
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