Keeper of Omen

Winter grates as the blackbird roams
through frosted limbs of trees... and shrills;
while moon hides from a brooding night 
its call, the threadbare air, refills.
My eyes mirror this drowning hymn 
while breaths cry out to agonize.
Deep within a starless backdrop
iced feathers cause anguish to rise.
 
And ebon wings defrock my mind
embedding stains on bleak frontier;
keeper of omen dares to haunt
as  love’s requiem awaits here.
Though wrapping the light from its crawl, 
snowflakes drop on  my pallid face
till raven foul the morning breaks ;
in dawn’s arms I lose fate’s embrace.


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Kelly Deschler's The Raven
9/27/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:39 AM
It is your art,congrats Nette.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Very suggestive title, nette, congrats on the win
Deschler Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:35 PM
I really enjoyed the haunting atmosphere that this poem creates. This was so elegant and beautifully written! Congrats on your win, Nette!
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Very glad to have found this one my friend. Adding this jewel to my fav list here and thanks for it.. A SUPER solid 7 it is ..
Richards Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 2:49 PM
With every poem, you captivate with a bit of magic. This I have wanted to reread more than once! Great words and images!
Casto Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 2:19 AM
You create a mysterious, almost mocking image of a scene that gives me chills. Fantastic use of words and metaphors, Nette, placed where they need to give impact!
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 11:54 AM
So eloquently penned, Nette. You create mood with such stunning imagery.
Goff Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Classic poetry, my friend! Dreamy sequence of longing...thanks for stopping by...yes...honesty was my true north in my love poem...not a subject i share often...as my personal life blossoms once more...i am aware of my feelings...jimbo
Sathasivam Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
Bateman Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Nette, I love your work here very much. Your diction, tone, pitch and imagery all synchronize themselves into a most marvelous and exquisite result. Your words literally transport the reader in person to this scene/vision you are portraying. Enjoyed It!! Cheers, Gary
Ioane Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 6:50 AM
I love words and this poem dear Nette is why I love poetry, you are such an inspiration. Thanks for sharing your gift. Alofas, Tiaua.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Wow quite an impressive write Nette!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:51 AM
very beautifully penned dear friend excellent piece
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Wow, this is a very impressive piece Nette. I could feel some shades of Mister Poe. Brilliant!
Halliday Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:36 AM
Wow. Deep. I read this three time and still am not in tune with what it means. Beautiful language though. M
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