Keep Your ''Friends Close''

My weeping willows were crying on my chest waiting for me..
                                Screaming for me to wake.
        The rain falling on my face;simply trying to shake me back to life..It was to perfect..I didn't understand,one morning a boy then to a man.
              How may I stand,what should I say;A simple touch on my shoulder.
        A wink too my eye,we had lost the race but i didn't understand why.
     He was the best for his position but never the less,all about money,sadly I confess.
          A game we dared not play,but we would shortly fade.I quickly learned do not
       play on their terms,shoot the opposition even when you know its wrong,If we
 would have struck then,this wouldn't have prolonged.Now there gone but I'm still 
                           
      here,sorry,never going away,  Kiss my foot Mr.D.A.Your God son, what more must I must I say.
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A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Jai, well expressed... LINDA
Bankson Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Have you figured out which one?lol
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October 16, 2015 at 5:41 PM
Post the rest Banky
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Very interesting expressions on friendship, Jai
Bankson Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Yea,That's an understatement.Sorry I didn't know I hadn't thanked you.A kind of follow up was finished last night,That's why I came down to read this,hope you will give it a read and tell me what you think. Take care Jai
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 7:25 AM
intriguing write.. mystery!!!
Bankson Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:40 AM
I'm so sorry,I just saw this for some reason,I appreciate it and yes,very much a mystery.I shouldn't have posted it until I did a re-write but oh-well.I just finished ''To Much Truth''this morning,its kind of series in a way.Hope you have a read.Thanks again.Sorry again,I was away for bit,Hope you two are still around. Jai
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