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Keep Me Craving

Honey.. sweet taste lingers, savored on my lips and tongue. Surely I'll never get enough of you. Susan Ashley July, 20, 2017

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John Watt

Date: 3/30/2020 12:57:00 PM

Nice cinquain riffing on the double meaning of the first word. Either way you go, it is highly desirable and leaves a sweet aftertaste! Beautifully written, my friend.

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/31/2020 7:31:00 PM

Indeed, my dear friend. Either way you go is the way to go :)) I'm so glad you appreciated the sweet lingering feel of my poem. Your rich comments are highly valued, John, and the encouragement given through your thoughtful words is priceless. Thank you for taking some time with my poem and for being such a great poetry friend. Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/15/2017 8:25:00 AM

I love honey, Susan, but I prefer to look at this as metaphorical craving, which makes it even more enticing! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/15/2017 9:20:00 AM

I agree with your warm sentiments Paul. This can be very enticing depending on which way its chosen to be interpreted.. Thank you for your delectable comments and the wonderful delight of your visit. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan