Keep Going My Dear

When Sun shines Bright,
And Opportunities grace your Sight;
Get going my dear
For chances are like drops of dew,
They last for a seconds few.

When perilous clouds darken your view,
And defeat looms large on you;
Keep going my dear
For this might be a passing phase,
Darkness shall soon give in to Sunny Rays.

When success kisses your feet,
And you savour the moments sweet;
Dont stop, Keep going my dear
For success might be a feat hard to attain,
But even harder it is to sustain.

Life is a race, So long,
With hurdles to stop you all along,
But Keep trying and keep going in life my dear
For your efforts shall reap benefits one day,
And you shall complete the race in a Triumphant way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/1/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:47:00 PM
Pushpendra Mahajan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:45:00 PM
PUSHPENDRA, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 9/3/2011 2:09:00 AM
Pushpendra-a motivational write...so energizing! I just love it! Gwendolen
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Pushpendra Mahajan
Date: 9/4/2011 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Gwendolen, Glad that you liked the poem :)
Date: 9/2/2011 12:36:00 PM
@ Casrol & Linda : Thank you @ Francine : Sorry I didnt realise that , I have removed it frm competition
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:45:00 AM
you have entered this in a contest that was titled "One English Quintain" . Your poem is not a Quintain, could you please remove it from the contest, I would be delighted if you wrote an English Quintain for submission to this contest
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Pushpendra Mahajan
Date: 9/4/2011 2:54:00 AM
Francine , Is there a competition for Rhymes, If yes please tell me as I am new to the site... Thank you :)
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Francine Roberts
Date: 9/2/2011 10:46:00 AM
p.s. this is a lovely poem and would do well in a contest for "rhymes"
Date: 9/2/2011 9:44:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Pushpendra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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