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sun shadows through my hair in my heart you drift, before sleep daylight dreams dancing everywhere heart-prints glide, almost there you are a dream i wish to keep stars upon my pillow in my heart you drift, before sleep wishes collect on the window my thoughts whispering low you are a dream i wish to keep wind with clouds, seasons glow in my heart you drift, before sleep halo on the moon, an echo touch of you, ache to know you are a dream i wish to keep ____________________ ~ Something Dreamy ~ Not for a Contest Form~ Lind68868 Featured Poem- 5/9/2021

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Robert Lindley

Date: 1/18/2022 3:41:00 PM

You gave us such a wondrously beautiful and romantic longing in verse within my then new poetry form. Truly exceptional talent had to have gone into creating this gem my dear friend. A definite fav and a gleaming jewel it truly is. God bless..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/18/2022 6:21:00 PM

Dear Robert, all of your kind words and compliments about my poetry truly humble me. Thank you for inventing this form. I enjoyed creating something dreamy and romantic. I appreciate you adding this little scribble to your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 1/1/2020 7:10:00 PM

I've said it before, I say it again, you write divinely, exquisitely, your words caress ones heart as soft as a gentle breeze upon a fair maidens cheek...~sigh~

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/1/2020 7:49:00 PM

So sweet of you to say. Your thoughts are romantic and dreamy. Thank you for reading my poetic whispers, for leaving your kind words upon them. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2019 7:25:00 AM

Glad to see this lovely poem climbing the best poem chart...congrats, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/12/2019 9:34:00 PM

:) Thank you Vijay!! This is just a simple poem from the heart. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/10/2019 1:17:00 AM

I like that, particularly early in the morning. Thank you for sharing, Kai

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/10/2019 3:10:00 PM

I like being lost in a dream, at any moment of the day. :) Thank you Kai. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/7/2019 5:33:00 PM

Hello Brandy Nicole, yes Nicole dreams are made to keep. have a nice evening my friend.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/7/2019 10:10:00 PM

Dear Darlene, thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you. May you have a wonderful weekend. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/4/2019 11:17:00 AM

Hi Brandy, We long for some dreams to never end, and if they do, and we happen to wake up, try to go back "to sleep - perhaps to dream" as quickly as possible - a fav - written with true poetic talent - hugs Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/4/2019 10:23:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, your kind words caress gently around the heart. Such a beautiful thing to say, about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. For favoring this little scribble of mine. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 6/3/2019 7:24:00 AM

Rich in its dreamlike quality. Well penned

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/3/2019 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 5/31/2019 2:35:00 PM

Beautiful, Brandy!! Very romantic, in a most poetic way. The repeated lines bring out the desired effect. A fav ~ Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/31/2019 6:40:00 PM

Dear Paul, thank you for your kind comment. For placing this in your favorites as well. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 5/30/2019 5:40:00 AM

A dream everyone would wish to keep. Such a beautiful and romantic scribble, Brandy. You have a knack for beautiful poetry...never disappoints :) hugs Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/30/2019 1:49:00 PM

:) Thank you Charlie. In a dream, anything is possible. Your thoughts bring a smile. My poetry always comes from the heart. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2019 10:27:00 PM

I got so poetry excited I failed to click fav. Did you know I wanted to FAV it?

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/29/2019 12:11:00 PM

:) You, excited?? Perhaps you did get a little bit. Thank you CayCay, for the wonderful comment and for placing this in your Favorites. ~ Brandy

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2019 10:24:00 PM

A FAV, A FAV,A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, man, I'm faving this poem that I just now fell in love with, maybe later I'll figure out all the whys contributing to my affection for it. A FAV, A FAV, A FAV

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/29/2019 12:07:00 PM

Oh my!!! I think you are wishing to FAV this little scribble of mine. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you CayCay. You are always so cheerful. Thank you for being here, for being You. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 5/28/2019 3:44:00 PM

Your poetry takes me on a journey everytime instead it... This is so romantic and lovely ...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/28/2019 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Castellenas

Date: 5/28/2019 9:47:00 AM

Gentle flow of words allowing the reader to feel and understand the words. A amazing poem Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/28/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thank you John. I enjoyed creating this dreamy little scribble. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/25/2019 7:57:00 AM

As written let it be done..."you are a dream i wish to keep" Lovely Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/25/2019 7:31:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 5/24/2019 7:21:00 AM

"Dreams dancing on the heart", beautiful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/24/2019 11:36:00 AM

:) Such a wonderful feeling, when dreams touch the heart. Thank you Joseph. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/21/2019 1:26:00 PM

Very nicely crafted, words that truly light up the evening.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/21/2019 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence. Very kind of you to say. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 5/21/2019 7:18:00 AM

Your beautiful words are very touching, Brandy, some dreams we never want to let go of. Those dreams will last a lifetime. All the best my sweet friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/21/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you John. You are right, some dreams linger for always. So deeply in the heart. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/21/2019 2:43:00 AM

Lovely piece Brandy, so full of great imagery and lovely rhyme. Blessings are yours, Gordon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/21/2019 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Gordon. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/20/2019 7:17:00 PM

Dreams are about all one can enjoy and keep safe! Nicely done! Aloha! Rico

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/20/2019 9:21:00 PM

Thank you Rico. In a dream, the possibilities are endless. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/20/2019 3:21:00 PM

Hello Brandy Nicole, I like this poem you created. So many dreams i had,I wanted to keep. Good dreams that made me feel special. have a nice day my friend.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/20/2019 7:03:00 PM

Dear Darlene, may your dreams always bring a smile and make you feel special. Thank you for your kind words. :) I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/20/2019 3:07:00 PM

The repeating lines make the poem flow beautifully..and enhance the rhythm that already resonates in heart.. and daylight dreams. A joy to read this dreamy, romantic poem..so well written, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/20/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Within these words, two lines repeat to express the emotions of my heart. You and your kind words are appreciated. Anything is possible in a dream. ~ Brandy