Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

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sun shadows through my hair 
in my heart you drift, before sleep
daylight dreams dancing everywhere
heart-prints glide, almost there
you are a dream i wish to keep

stars upon my pillow
in my heart you drift, before sleep
wishes collect on the window
my thoughts whispering low
you are a dream i wish to keep

wind with clouds, seasons glow
in my heart you drift, before sleep
halo on the moon, an echo
touch of you, ache to know
you are a dream i wish to keep



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~ Something Dreamy ~
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Featured Poem- 5/9/2021

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Robert Lindley January 18, 2022 at 3:41 PM You gave us such a wondrously beautiful and romantic longing in verse within my then new poetry form. Truly exceptional talent had to have gone into creating this gem my dear friend. A definite fav and a gleaming jewel it truly is. God bless.. Brandy Nicole January 18, 2022 at 6:21 PM Dear Robert, all of your kind words and compliments about my poetry truly humble me. Thank you for inventing this form. I enjoyed creating something dreamy and romantic. I appreciate you adding this little scribble to your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves January 1, 2020 at 7:10 PM I've said it before, I say it again, you write divinely, exquisitely, your words caress ones heart as soft as a gentle breeze upon a fair maidens cheek...~sigh~ Brandy Nicole January 1, 2020 at 7:49 PM So sweet of you to say. Your thoughts are romantic and dreamy. Thank you for reading my poetic whispers, for leaving your kind words upon them. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit June 12, 2019 at 7:25 AM Glad to see this lovely poem climbing the best poem chart...congrats, Brandy. Brandy Nicole June 12, 2019 at 9:34 PM :) Thank you Vijay!! This is just a simple poem from the heart. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Kai Michael Neumann June 10, 2019 at 1:17 AM I like that, particularly early in the morning. Thank you for sharing, Kai Brandy Nicole June 10, 2019 at 3:10 PM I like being lost in a dream, at any moment of the day. :) Thank you Kai. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu June 7, 2019 at 5:33 PM Hello Brandy Nicole, yes Nicole dreams are made to keep. have a nice evening my friend. Brandy Nicole June 7, 2019 at 10:10 PM Dear Darlene, thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you. May you have a wonderful weekend. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos June 4, 2019 at 11:17 AM Hi Brandy, We long for some dreams to never end, and if they do, and we happen to wake up, try to go back "to sleep - perhaps to dream" as quickly as possible - a fav - written with true poetic talent - hugs Jennifer. Brandy Nicole June 4, 2019 at 10:23 PM Dear Jennifer, your kind words caress gently around the heart. Such a beautiful thing to say, about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. For favoring this little scribble of mine. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. June 3, 2019 at 7:24 AM Rich in its dreamlike quality. Well penned Brandy Nicole June 3, 2019 at 1:58 PM Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Paul Callus May 31, 2019 at 2:35 PM Beautiful, Brandy!! Very romantic, in a most poetic way. The repeated lines bring out the desired effect. A fav ~ Regards // paul Brandy Nicole May 31, 2019 at 6:40 PM Dear Paul, thank you for your kind comment. For placing this in your favorites as well. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina May 30, 2019 at 5:40 AM A dream everyone would wish to keep. Such a beautiful and romantic scribble, Brandy. You have a knack for beautiful poetry...never disappoints :) hugs Charlie Brandy Nicole May 30, 2019 at 1:49 PM :) Thank you Charlie. In a dream, anything is possible. Your thoughts bring a smile. My poetry always comes from the heart. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

CayCay Godwin May 28, 2019 at 10:27 PM I got so poetry excited I failed to click fav. Did you know I wanted to FAV it? Brandy Nicole May 29, 2019 at 12:11 PM :) You, excited?? Perhaps you did get a little bit. Thank you CayCay, for the wonderful comment and for placing this in your Favorites. ~ Brandy

CayCay Godwin May 28, 2019 at 10:24 PM A FAV, A FAV,A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, A FAV, man, I'm faving this poem that I just now fell in love with, maybe later I'll figure out all the whys contributing to my affection for it. A FAV, A FAV, A FAV Brandy Nicole May 29, 2019 at 12:07 PM Oh my!!! I think you are wishing to FAV this little scribble of mine. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you CayCay. You are always so cheerful. Thank you for being here, for being You. ~ Brandy

Silent One May 28, 2019 at 3:44 PM Your poetry takes me on a journey everytime instead it... This is so romantic and lovely ... Brandy Nicole May 28, 2019 at 4:34 PM Thank you Silent One. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Castellenas May 28, 2019 at 9:47 AM Gentle flow of words allowing the reader to feel and understand the words. A amazing poem Brandy. Brandy Nicole May 28, 2019 at 4:27 PM Thank you John. I enjoyed creating this dreamy little scribble. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael May 25, 2019 at 7:57 AM As written let it be done..."you are a dream i wish to keep" Lovely Brandy Brandy Nicole May 25, 2019 at 7:31 PM Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Joseph May May 24, 2019 at 7:21 AM "Dreams dancing on the heart", beautiful write Brandy.. Brandy Nicole May 24, 2019 at 11:36 AM :) Such a wonderful feeling, when dreams touch the heart. Thank you Joseph. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp May 21, 2019 at 1:26 PM Very nicely crafted, words that truly light up the evening. Brandy Nicole May 21, 2019 at 2:07 PM Thank you Lawrence. Very kind of you to say. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf May 21, 2019 at 7:18 AM Your beautiful words are very touching, Brandy, some dreams we never want to let go of. Those dreams will last a lifetime. All the best my sweet friend. John Brandy Nicole May 21, 2019 at 10:05 AM Thank you John. You are right, some dreams linger for always. So deeply in the heart. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell May 21, 2019 at 2:43 AM Lovely piece Brandy, so full of great imagery and lovely rhyme. Blessings are yours, Gordon Brandy Nicole May 21, 2019 at 10:02 AM Thank you Gordon. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Rico Leffanta May 20, 2019 at 7:17 PM Dreams are about all one can enjoy and keep safe! Nicely done! Aloha! Rico Brandy Nicole May 20, 2019 at 9:21 PM Thank you Rico. In a dream, the possibilities are endless. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu May 20, 2019 at 3:21 PM Hello Brandy Nicole, I like this poem you created. So many dreams i had,I wanted to keep. Good dreams that made me feel special. have a nice day my friend. Brandy Nicole May 20, 2019 at 7:03 PM Dear Darlene, may your dreams always bring a smile and make you feel special. Thank you for your kind words. :) I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit May 20, 2019 at 3:07 PM The repeating lines make the poem flow beautifully..and enhance the rhythm that already resonates in heart.. and daylight dreams. A joy to read this dreamy, romantic poem..so well written, Brandy. Brandy Nicole May 20, 2019 at 6:59 PM Thank you Vijay. Within these words, two lines repeat to express the emotions of my heart. You and your kind words are appreciated. Anything is possible in a dream. ~ Brandy