Kaza

you brought me here
and tried to show me the world
but  your eyes were vailed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 5, 2011 at 6:04 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Jeremy. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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May 4, 2011 at 5:12 PM
very interesting haiku. hope you have an excellent day! :) ------Ell
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