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Kayaks

Kayaks

Kailua Beach, sandy shores
keep paddlers at bay view,
kissing turquoise surface,
keenly riding the lips,
knocking on pantomime,
kid like, with seaman dreams, 
kayaking reefs of bay.

3/9/17

adventurebeachparadisesunverse

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Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2017 at 4:19 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Connie :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Pachecho

March 14, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Thank you for the well wishes. Although something donned on me.

Agnes Krampe

March 13, 2017 at 10:52 PM

Congrats on your win, Connie. Lovely imagery! I have kayaked on rivers, but never on the sea.

Connie Pachecho

March 14, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Kim Merryman

March 13, 2017 at 5:34 PM

You paint a vivid picture of kayaks in the surf, Connie. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Connie Pachecho

March 14, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Roy Pett

March 9, 2017 at 4:59 PM

Great Pleiades Connie, well worked out poem, good luck in the contest, Roy. :))

Connie Pachecho

March 14, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

CayCay Godwin

March 9, 2017 at 1:11 PM

Forms of the words kiss, keen and keep are like the best sentence starters for "K" that I found, you, too, huh? I wonder if they will 'frequent' all the entries. Yours is great, each line goes smoothly to the next and an image/feel is given. Good job, Connie - sincerely. All the best ... CayCay

Connie Pachecho

March 14, 2017 at 9:07 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.