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Kayaks Kailua Beach, sandy shores keep paddlers at bay view, kissing turquoise surface, keenly riding the lips, knocking on pantomime, kid like, with seaman dreams, kayaking reefs of bay. 3/9/17

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 4:19:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Connie :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes. Although something donned on me.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/13/2017 10:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Connie. Lovely imagery! I have kayaked on rivers, but never on the sea.

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:06:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2017 5:34:00 PM

You paint a vivid picture of kayaks in the surf, Connie. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Roy Pett

Date: 3/9/2017 4:59:00 PM

Great Pleiades Connie, well worked out poem, good luck in the contest, Roy. :))

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/9/2017 1:11:00 PM

Forms of the words kiss, keen and keep are like the best sentence starters for "K" that I found, you, too, huh? I wonder if they will 'frequent' all the entries. Yours is great, each line goes smoothly to the next and an image/feel is given. Good job, Connie - sincerely. All the best ... CayCay

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:07:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2017 12:47:00 PM

- Lovely written, Connie - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/14/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thank you for the well wishes. Hugs.