Kashinath

K iss of his lover still lingering in his lips,
A s the setting sun's ray kisses his face
S omething melancholy creeps in his mind;
H e is a warrior waiting for another battle.
I n case this is the last battle he would fight
N ever again will he return to his lover
A nd hold her in his strong arms tenderly
T ouching,caresssing her terracotta face,
H e thus kisses his flute, sending a sorrowful melody.


© kashinath karmakar 
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By:kashinath karmakar (21st March 2011)

**Written for Constance's contest"Tell his story" but missed the deadline
by few minutes .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bloomsfield Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 5:12 AM
I love'his story'. .i hope he makes it to his love . .melanchonic and beautiful. .glad i got to read your work..always C.C
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March 22, 2011 at 5:56 AM
So sorry u missed the deadline for the contest Kashinath as this is a rare beauty .. wonderful touching words to express the photo.. well her new contest is joyful theme about The Sundress ..am sure u will do well in it luv..
Neels Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:53 AM
What a pity you missed out on Constance's contest with this gem Kash.. Absolutely love the interpretation ;) Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:53 PM
sorry you missed the contest, Kash!
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:42 PM
What a shame you missed the contest, Kashinath!! This is so lovely, Constance would have loved it! Melancholy, sweet, and sad!!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:23 PM
ok I'm back (I just had to leave you that name in soupmail while it was fresh in my mind)., Kash, this is indeed a melancholy poem with great atmosphere. The best is how you finished it in those last few lines. Comparing the flute to his lover's kisses.Very wonderful image. Best of luck in the contest. Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 3:19 PM
soupmail.
Falotico Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Very good write, One that Constance will Love as I do...
Maverick Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Soulfull write here Kashinath.
Poet Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Perhaps I was too busy with that flute!!
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