Karmic

Karmic 

War is a tragic thing, with only suffering
Prince of peace is a coming new order to bring
The more subconscious thought of it will sing
Of our wanted change of everything
The great unwashed subconscious can bring him!


When I can see, For a second, the face of our lord
I ask with a shudder, for a person to heal, 
Hoping  karma can be ignored
Where do you sit on Karmas great wheel?

If i shudder, I’m not being ignored
it worked on my toothache, neuralgia, don’t  feel
Moses could not look on the face of the lord.
neither can I, split second afford
but I try and I try to appeal

love and good health babe’s
Don
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 20, 2011 at 6:19 AM
well DON many are predicting tomorrow..my birthday.. as the last day.. oh how wonderful ... and this piece is reflective of your deep inner core of belief of supreme being in charge of all .. be assured He has it all under control .. an awesome write my friend ...luv..
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May 20, 2011 at 5:46 AM
What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. Can't get much better then this. I hope you have a great weekend Don. Love, Carol
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May 19, 2011 at 7:52 PM
this wonderfully written. cory
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May 19, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Sweet Carolyn Devonshire, I still hold you dear, as a friend of long ago, i have still got. Claim good health, ease the pain, I want you well again, by Christ's loving light you want for not! love lamb 2 ....beer no so much.. moderation , do i clutch. I will ask again for you Don
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May 19, 2011 at 4:17 PM
It's wonderful how you've mastered this healing power, Don. And I do believe the Lord is returning for us soon. Hold the beer -- I don't drink. Just LOVE lamb though! Thanks for the comment. Best wishes, Carolyn
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