Karena From Sarena

KARENA FROM SARENA

Like a bat out of hell,
In the dark does she dwell.

Thinks she’s La Belle, 
But in fact a mere shell,

Her name is Karena,
And she lives in Sarena.

She tells fantasy tales,
About females and males,

Oh my, not the same,
All over again,

For upon my word,
All she says is absurd!

She assumes she is clever,
And to this end will never,

Admit she’s outsmarted,
That is only for the fainthearted

Says she is humble not famous,
Her thoughts quite outrageous!

So if you ever hear of Karena,
Who lives in Sarena,

Steer clear, for your name
Made mud by this dame

She burps and blurbs, insults hurls
A woman whose mind twists and twirls!

Pure Fantasy you say,
Absolutely, all the way!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Horne Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 7:59 AM
LOL, very relieved to see at the end that this lady isn't real. She sounded very scary indeed!
Proxenos Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:13 PM
I didn't mean to scare you, sorry Jack, but it take all sorts in this world and so called humanity. Thanks for your support Jack. I have fallen behind with replying to comments but have started catching up now. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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August 31, 2020 at 11:24 PM
Karena, she sound like a dangerous lady. I liked the energy and the drive of the words. You create place, strong character and interesting topic. A entertaining poem.
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Thank-you for a lovely comment John - very kind of you. It was a little bit of fun and fiction! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 8:48 PM
I will consider myself duly forewarned, Jenny! Your creativity is beyond measure. Hugs ~ John
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Thank-you John but if a met anyone like that ever, I would send you all a soup mail - fiction and fun - thank-you always for your awesome comments. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Fantasy Island, here we come! Thanks, Jennifer. Enjoyed! :) gw
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Absolutely Gershon! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 12:35 AM
Now I'm smiling, Jenny:) Thank you for the warning; I'll make sure to steer away from her lol! Your imagination and fantasy make a great couple:) ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Thank-you Paul, no fear, she is not real - just a fction of the imagination, imagine if she was - oh my goodness. Warm regards and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Excellent rhyme and rhythm my friend and so well told. I've known a few like that and they taught me the ugliness of gossip. Gossip is very high on my list of pet peeves. My aunt used to say,"Gossip is like soft soap, it's mostly lie." A fine write as always. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Judy my friend, catching up, way behind and you my dear friend are always so prompt. Enjoyed you comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Well, I like the flow of this poem, the rhymes and internal rhyme... so, is she a real person? Lol
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Fictitious - thank goodness - imagine someone like that in real life - thanks for the comment my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Wow, this is such a lovely poem. Really enjoyed it... Stay blessed
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thanks Pagunda, one of my scribbles - thank you for commenting my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Horsman Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 11:53 PM
Thanks for the warning, Jennifer, Can't fault the poetry though.
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Pleasure my friend. Keep well and safe. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:29 AM
- Love it ... I read it with smile on my mouth :) - Have a wonderful day, my dear soul sister :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Thanks soul sister, you are a honey bunch! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 1:20 PM
One lady I'll steer clear of Jennifer Tom
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:18 AM
No messing around with this lady! Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Enjoyable, Jennifer, and in short couplets.
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Thank-you Kim, just a scribble. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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