Kandahar

woe daylight
emptied out
into nights glare 
canvasing mirth
beneath a wondering 
phlight amid thought 
that weathered thee
unforgiving soundless
panting we'd opened 
an empty potrait
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 13, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Beautiful! Short and to the point.
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