Kaleidoscopic Whirlpools

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Posted 11 July 2025, for 'Some Kind Of Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest' Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

phantasmagorical is love's colorful view in the kaleidoscope spun to paint scenes anew in rose-tinted glasses with love shining right through

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Christine Watts

Date: 7/17/2025 8:35:00 PM

Hi John Wow a nice poem for this contest and I learnt a new word with phantasmagorical Met all requirements and congrats on your win Cheers Christine

John Anderson
Date: 7/17/2025 9:10:00 PM

fantastic - tanks for the feedback. Cheers

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2025 12:57:00 PM

pretty!

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2025 1:09:00 PM

Yes cute! Thanks for the feedback. Cheers!