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whirl

Posted 11 July 2025, for 'Some Kind Of Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest' Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Kaleidoscopic Whirlpools

phantasmagorical
is love's colorful view
in the kaleidoscope
spun to paint scenes anew
in rose-tinted glasses
with love shining right through
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Watts Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 8:35 PM
Hi John Wow a nice poem for this contest and I learnt a new word with phantasmagorical Met all requirements and congrats on your win Cheers Christine
Anderson Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 9:10 PM
fantastic - tanks for the feedback. Cheers
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 12:57 PM
pretty!
Anderson Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Yes cute! Thanks for the feedback. Cheers!
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