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Kaleidoscope-Past

As I slowly Turned kaleidoscope's Wheel, thinking a repeat as last A scene shocked; horror seen Years from my past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Croft Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 5:08 PM
congrats on your placement!
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 5:20 AM
Why, thank you, Karen. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 8:00 PM
I do love this one! Congrats, Sara!
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:18 AM
Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate your visit with congrats. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 1:36 PM
Like a horror movie indeed!
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Kim. I am glad you got the vive. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K.
Godwin Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 6:20 PM
whoa, dangles us in mystery and a dark feel overwhelms
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Good take, Cay Cay. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 4:49 PM
well penned and engaging poem....image is perfect!
Kendrick Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 4:34 AM
Sara B., thank you for the uplifting review. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Oh that picture with your poem. Makes it all the better.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Andrea. It was not easy trying to find one that I thought might give the effect that I was looking for. I appreciate the visit. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:01 PM
Thoughts that are harmful to us may and do come from the devil. Stay focused on the future and never turn back, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 4:21 PM
I agree, Lasaad, that negative thoughts do not come from above, but from Satan who is trying to harm us in one way or another. Thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K.
Rodgers Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Dear Sara, to me, your poem feels like the sudden jolt of memory that comes when you least expect it. I love how you use the kaleidoscope, something meant for beauty and play to reveal a moment from the past that startles instead of delights. A striking little bite of truth. Blessings, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your insightful comments about my work. I appreciate your visit. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K.
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June 11, 2026 at 9:35 AM
- Don't look back... shadows of the past, Sara - Great one :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:06 AM
Anne-Lise, I try to only go forward, Anne-Lise, but at times I guess maybe Satan can or does throw thoughts our way to harm us. Thank you for dropping by and leaving a kind review and the smiley face. Sara K.
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June 11, 2026 at 9:12 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative "Kaleidoscope-Past" write with a great picture. Have a fun day writing away..........
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Why, thank you, Paula. I guess I could try to write all day long, but I don't quite make that goal. LOL..Sara K.
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