Written 31 May 2o26 for Waka-Sonnet Fragment Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet
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In my garden Rays of the rising sun Spin bright hues on dews on flowers as sunbeams on glasses~ Nature`s wonder. With the sunrise Colours dance in my soul As I gaze at hues on flowers Like light on a clear prism~ Nature`s sweet gift.
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