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Kaleidoscope of Sound

Colors of the spectrum Light up my world Bright rays dancing Shades enhancing The kaleidoscope of sound I can feel it all around A whisper on the wind The murmur of the stream Rustling of leaves Creaking of the eaves Roaring of the waves Cooing of a babe Birds a chirping Bees a buzzing Thunder rumbling Mountain crumbling Ringing honking Beeping thumping Crashing clanging Booming bopping Intermingling all together In every season, scene or weather And it echoes in my head As I lie on heather beds Such a masterful symphony Sweetest ever melody, All the world´s life in harmony.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 9:11:00 PM
Carolina, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Carolina De Las Salas
Date: 5/22/2013 12:25:00 PM
Hey SKAT! Ok, first, can I just ask what that stands for?! Second, thank you soooo much for that warm welcome, definitely didn't expect being so appreciated right off the bat! I will definitely be checking out your and others' poems. If you have any recommendations as to where to begin, I'd be very grateful. So far, I love it here! It's exactly what I was hoping to find when looking somewhere to publish my poems.
Date: 5/1/2013 5:08:00 PM
If you don't mind I will look up your blogs, and check out your poems. However I do hope you love it here. and post many poems for us to read...xox~ Linda
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Carolina De Las Salas
Date: 5/22/2013 12:18:00 PM
My blog is still under construction, I'm not the most skilled at HTML and all, so I'm having trouble getting things the way I see them in my head. So I guess I will be posting poems here before putting them up on my blog, actually, LOL. Thanks soo much for reading, so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/1/2013 12:25:00 AM
Your poem has a nicely structured rhyme scheme that flows quite smoothly. A refreshing piece for first entry to the soup. You seem to have a gift for gab.
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Carolina De Las Salas
Date: 5/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hi Debbie, so glad you liked it, I was scared of posting it at first 'cause I wasn't sure if anyone else would like the flow of the words, and it seems everything I write ends up having a similar structure, guess it's my style, however unintended!
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Debra Mundine
Date: 5/1/2013 12:26:00 AM
I.m Debbie, also a newcomer by the way. Welcome.
Date: 4/29/2013 8:03:00 PM
I like this poem Carolina, very pretty, like the word harmony, a perfect 7 poem.... "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Carolina De Las Salas
Date: 4/30/2013 12:06:00 PM
Hi Linda, thank you so much for your kind review, this was the first poem I wrote when I really started writing, and not just as an assignment in high school. I'll keep on posting my poems here, but you can also find them on my blog, cdreams27@blogspot.com