Jill Spagnola Poet sehra

Kaleidoscope of Butterflies

*****lol first attempt at Sehra, form..if I have failed will another wordsmith share their knowledge?:)

                          Kaleidoscope of Butterflies

~Tenors, base, all creating an seemingly endless hum… from beginning through  songs duration……Tenors and base humming… in background sounding on and off, … in background… 


                           Universe, space, stratosphere
                                ATMOSPHERE, Earth’
                            Joins two souls together

 
 ( Chorus, repeat 3x,s)  

…..A likened to butterflies through a kalei’do’scope, we come together…..freely choosing to bond alike butterflies resting in moonlit fields, we come together…

                         Forest green, reddest-red, 
                          Blue-citron silken veils 
            Brightly adorned faces, non-so lovely as bride, Le fem’


(Chorus)


                              Alike a rainbow
                 Colors expressing a Universal Atmosphere
              Vibing radiantly, spilling-over, covering Earth
           FULL of light and happiness at the resonance of vows

( Chorus, final)

Jill
~ for contest of Julia Ward ~
5~15~2016

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Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 4:41 AM wow I see you like butterflies too - what an unusual form you have shared with us:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2016 at 3:25 PM So unusual. I don't know anything about this form, but you did a pretty poem! and thanks so much for your words on my recent poem.

Karam Misra May 17, 2016 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on a wonderful poem. Your poem is probably the first of its kind on Poetry soup. Never seen it in English. ~karam~ Jill Spagnola May 27, 2016 at 7:23 AM Karam, all apologies for taking so long to reply. If you ever get a minute please teach me what you know of sehra. I searched and found very little. Did I do it correctly? Hope to hear from you...truly, jill :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 17, 2016 at 2:41 AM Oblivious I am to this form but not the beauty this poem conveys, Complimenti cara, jill! Mille bazi! Jill Spagnola May 27, 2016 at 7:20 AM Demetrios, una propria un'altra, belle, wise soul. Ti ringrazio molto...jill