Kaleidoscope Life

I live in yellow More colors come to call me Orange has the edge 12/29/12

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Kerry Singleton

Date: 1/14/2013 7:33:00 PM

Great color's nice James :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2013 2:37:00 PM

like your choice of colour and the poem too....

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/30/2012 6:35:00 PM

: ) Loving your Senryu, James! Thanks for reading my poems. A very happy New Year to you and yours. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2012 4:09:00 PM

I really like this one..I hope that you always have a kaleidoscope of color about you and in your life..Happy New Year..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2012 11:35:00 AM

wow, this is a really cool senryu. And colorful!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2012 11:35:00 AM

FAVE

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/29/2012 8:50:00 AM

Good one, I especially like the title, it could lend itself to a series of poems in a number of styles. Thanks for reading and commenting on a few of my poems.