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Written July 6, 2017
For The Throwback Challenge Contest
Sponsored by Natasha L Scragg

Entered November 27, 2023

First Verse Is A Charm Contest

Sponsored by Jaymee Thomas

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A gentle turn
changing colors, changing pattern
greet you lively, fill your transfixed eye
you can’t resist looking through even if you try.

A gentle move
changing feelings, changing groove
enchant you within, entice your heart
you can’t stop trying even if anew you start.

A gentle twist
changing concerns, changing wish-list
enrich relationships close, please others
you don’t lose trying even if the mind dithers.

A gentle jerk
changing vista, changing framework
transform you, liven your listless life
you can’t stop doing even in times of strife.

A gentle tap
changing design, changing roadmap
morph the mind, create colored hope
you can’t desist looking in the kaleidoscope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/13/2025 6:50:00 PM
Okay, hope you don't mind that I add you to my FAVs. This poem is a life changing poem. Thanksforsharing!!!
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Date: 3/12/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A colorful write. I loved playing with these as a kid. "Move, twist, shake and tap" They were so much fun just like your write. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 3/12/2022 3:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this gem, and for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 8/24/2020 1:53:00 PM
Beautifully crafted ~ the symbolism of the kaleidoscope is amazing. Congrats on your three-year anniversary with PS, Subimal.
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:42:00 AM
Great first post and you have entered some great poems for contests, since you joined... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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Date: 1/27/2020 2:52:00 PM
Subimal congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 5/12/2019 9:37:00 AM
An excellent First offering to the soup.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/12/2019 11:49:00 PM
Thank you Richard so very much for your visit and encouragement.

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