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Written July 6, 2017
For The Throwback Challenge Contest
Sponsored by Natasha L Scragg

Entered November 27, 2023

First Verse Is A Charm Contest

Sponsored by Jaymee Thomas

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A gentle turn changing colors, changing pattern greet you lively, fill your transfixed eye you can’t resist looking through even if you try. A gentle move changing feelings, changing groove enchant you within, entice your heart you can’t stop trying even if anew you start. A gentle twist changing concerns, changing wish-list enrich relationships close, please others you don’t lose trying even if the mind dithers. A gentle jerk changing vista, changing framework transform you, liven your listless life you can’t stop doing even in times of strife. A gentle tap changing design, changing roadmap morph the mind, create colored hope you can’t desist looking in the kaleidoscope.

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Date: 3/12/2022 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A colorful write. I loved playing with these as a kid. "Move, twist, shake and tap" They were so much fun just like your write. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 3/12/2022 3:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this gem, and for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 8/24/2020 1:53:00 PM
Beautifully crafted ~ the symbolism of the kaleidoscope is amazing. Congrats on your three-year anniversary with PS, Subimal.
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2020 3:42:00 AM
Great first post and you have entered some great poems for contests, since you joined... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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Date: 1/27/2020 2:52:00 PM
Subimal congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 5/12/2019 9:37:00 AM
An excellent First offering to the soup.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/12/2019 11:49:00 PM
Thank you Richard so very much for your visit and encouragement.

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