Kaiture Falls: Longest One-Drop In the World

I 
                   heard
                and pledged,
                that one day 
             this natural wonder,
         will be experienced by me.
         Thunderous, Roaring from afar.
A narrow mountain stream meandering down the steep side, into a beautiful Falls!

                        O
                        no
                     I won’t 
                    rest a bit, 
                 for “Itanamee”
    folk-lored and worshipped by ancestors,
I was told, angrily swallowed many Porknockers!
From the Potaro River below they cried: “Captain put me ashore”!

                        This
                        high
                   rock mountain,
          Mount Rorima, that is it’s name
         does rise majestically into the sky!
Shared among neighboring countries, this mountain top - Brazil, Guyana and Venezuela.

                         A
                        sight,
                        beauty!
                       beheld in 
                     every beholder 
       who sets eyes upon this ancient god; 
    that replenishes plants and small creatures above;
     Kaiture! Mightily and powerfully pours below!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Your imagery wonderful, and I like the fibonacci pattern in this particular poem so well! Nicely done my friend!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Hello Rainbow Promise, you have painted a lovely picture with your words.I could see ths scene as | read this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Promise Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Thank you Darlene De Beaulieu for your wonderful comment. Glad that I was able to “paint” a scene for you with words. Please feel free to visit my page anytime. Hugs Rainbow
Sietesantos Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Absolutely beautiful and captivating! I had the pleasure of visiting Guyana many years ago and you have indeed done great justice to this natural wonder, painting a lovely portrait! Well done, Rainbow!Hugs. Pandita
Promise Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Glad you enjoyed reading about Kaiture the ancient god worshipped by natives at that time. A wonder indeed. Thank you again.
Promise Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Thank you for your comment Pandora. I had the pleasure of reading your poem “We’ll Be Together Again”. This gave me more hope for seeing my mother again. Great write. Hugs, Rainbow.
Gentry Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Enjoyed this! I've never tried this form. I found this very interesting and informative.
Promise Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Thanks for your encouraging comment. This is my second try at this form. I believe it brought out the thunderous roaring noise when said aloud. God bless you. Rainbow Promise.
Downing  Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:58 AM
So nice Rainbow, I enjoyed the read... hugs :)
Promise Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Thank You Akknika, glad you enjoyed reading it. You are welcomed to visit my page/site anytime. Best wishes RP.
One Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Great poetry..
Promise Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Thank you for your encouraging remarks Silent.
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