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Kaimuki Coffee

Coffee drips Down the face of my cup: My mind wanders

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/18/2016 12:07:00 PM
Lovely imagery - I am a tea person myself:-) :-) I would classify it as a senryu rather than a haiku:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/20/2016 5:29:00 PM
Well I've learned something now Jim never heard of American haiku then again when I started writing there were many forms I had never heard of at all - thanks for your feedback :-) hugs Jan xx
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Ijm seven
Date: 6/18/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thank you I would classify this as a modern American haiku in line with Kerouac haiku style I truly appreciate your feedback as I enjoy so many of your writes.