Kai Aku

Keeling upon the open sea 
A moving mountain majesty,
is colossal water’s slow roll ~
To stars, I pray for land to stroll …

As confused waves begin to toss,
keeping sane where vertigo’s boss,
under fear's fold, it’s Neptune’s call…
To depths, I pray to end this gall ~

Kraken-wind unfurls mighty arms
as sails heave-to, trying to calm
It steers while we wait our bell’s toll ~
To steel, I pray strength doesn’t pall…

As tentacles release their hold,
knaves of blue-bottles float by, bold!
Unto such vast numbers, don’t fall ~
To sun, I pray for land to stroll…

(9/9/2022)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Hadn't known of Kai Aku... Thank you for the introductory education, Susan... Rough stuff... Not coincidentally, they say that even experienced sailors (and pilots) yearn to feel terra firma under them after arduous journeys. Here's to equilibrium, Gershon
Woodrow Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:54 PM
yes, that was my rough intro to the 'open sea' or 'kai aku'... when at long last i stepped on land, I was rolling in my head for a good week lol! Equilibrium is very good! :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:49 PM
very cool imagery with the Kraken and all the bottles released. GREAT poetry, my friend
Woodrow Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 9:51 PM
thank you Andrea :)
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