K. S. { Broken Monoku }

beneath coral depths reefbed


                        the mother of all pearls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 2, 2010 at 5:06 PM
good luck inthe contest, this is a nice read,..p.d.
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May 1, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Good use of imagery for an uplifting view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Hope you are feeling better. Karen
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May 1, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Katherine.Rgds Brian
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May 1, 2010 at 6:46 AM
I get a hidden message from this one..Those coral reefs are so beautifully colored but are razor sharp....hard to penetrate...Like someone with an outer protective barrier but inside if allowed to come forth would be a Mother Of Pearl...Great write...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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May 1, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Appreciate as I have first hand experience at lover's quarrels and being shattered..but now is not the case.. and to write so early on a Saturday ..oh my... thankxxx for your encouragement and support and good luck with the coral reef description as well..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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