Just You and Me

By the crystal sea,
Just you and me.
Glancing endlessly,
To find such purity.

He took her by surprise,
When he kissed her luscious lips.
Ahhh! Those lips felt so divine
Wanted so, to make her mine.

I took a glimpse at him,
Grabbed him by the hand
We both then laid, 
in the smooth, dry sand.

She looked so poised,
Just like the kiss, so moist.
She then woke up, realized
It wasn't a dream, she cried.

The sun the sand
The water the hands
Holding on with passion,
Kissed her with compassion.

Thensomethigng caught her eye,
There was a bottle with a message
He had it planned all this time
She ran to pick it up, then cried.

"What can a man do to make
his girl happy?" he said,
Its just a matter of time, 
didn't want to be mislead.


She took the message out to read
Tears ran down her smooth cheeks
He had written how he loved her so
Never wanted her to go

She read
Your smile is so fine,
I wont leave you behind.
With your eyes so bright,
Theres no need for light,
Your body that I feel,
Makes me want to kneel
And say that I love you.

She couldn't believe it wasn't a dream.
When she read his note, she screamed.
She felt like the luckiest girl alive.
She said she'd be with him all her life.


I want to thank Mr X, for writing this poem with me.  He is a good friend and really enjoyed co writing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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