Just Wondering
Are my words confuseing
Do they leave your heart ringing
Are my points dulled by my rhyme
Making reading them a waste of time
Do they fall off the page
Are they just too vague
I try to be simple and straight
With words that don't agitate
I try to encourage with good advice
By shareing the lessons I've learned in my life
I hope that you enjoy what you read
I hope that I have given you something you need
To be of help is my only wish
Not to write poems that stink like a fish
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