Just Wind

reportedly
the wind hitting the forehead it was in fact too hard
but it is only the wind

reportedly again
a wind crashing, it's hard
will soon pass

lovelyric

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Poet Destroyer A

May 24, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Ell, Congrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2015 at 6:23 PM

I enjoyed the read. Congrats on your win.

Emmanuel Brian Oule

May 22, 2015 at 9:30 AM

Congs. upon your poem I liked it Bryan

Skat A

May 21, 2015 at 7:19 PM

Ell, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*

Ell Harry

May 22, 2015 at 9:24 AM

what do you mean SKAT? Honestly, i don't know fully about poetryshoup.. could you tell me SKAT? Thanks

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2015 at 12:21 PM

Hello Ell, the wind can crash in so many ways. Glad most of the time, it's only passing by. Enjoyed the verse, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Ell Harry

May 22, 2015 at 9:26 AM

Hallo Linda... Honestly, i don't know fully about poetryshoup.. could you tell me Linda? Thanks

Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 2:13 PM

ELL . Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ell Harry

May 12, 2015 at 10:34 PM

Hallo SKAT.. thankyou for comment. Iam Indonesian Poet. I was Written Poem since 2007. whnen i study in Junior High School. Actually, I have more than 500 peoms in Indonesian language. I want to Translate my poem in english language, but I am not sure with my english. My english so bad. hehehe.. nice to meet you SKAT

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