Just Such Beauty

tender breezes blow soft dreamtime meanderings summer's closing bough August 22, 2020 2pm PST

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2020 3:38:00 AM

- So beautifully described, Panagiota :) - Have a wonderful Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/23/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Anne Lise....I disliked Haikus when I first came here. Now, I like them.)) I struggled to learn them. Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/22/2020 7:45:00 PM

Bravo! Real craftmanship here! Precious penning, Panagiota! Tender and Touching, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 8:06:00 PM

Thank you Gershon! I love when poems just bloom from my pen. This was a fragrant blossom to me. Glad you enjoyed it. Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/22/2020 4:10:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, this poem makes me feel like day dreaming.Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/23/2020 10:52:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I do daydream all the time. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 8:08:00 PM

Hi Darlene...keep daydreaming..,it' a great exercise, Panagiota xx

John Watt

Date: 8/22/2020 4:08:00 PM

Boy, was I glad for some tender breezes blowing today when I had to be outside. It's hot enough to melt your eyeballs outside. Enjoyed your lovely summer ode, Pangie. Hope you are doing well. How is Eddie's baseball season going?

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 8:16:00 PM

John, baseball first. Since the fires began and are still raging out of control, you might not know just how bad it is. Health advisory is to stay inside. Particles of smoke are tiny and effect our lungs. So no baseball. But he is in a real classrom in a private school. I am experiencing both sadness and fear, Skies are scary looking in No Cal. Keep cool...thank you, Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/22/2020 2:56:00 PM

Beautiful haiku that says it all, Pangie! Many thanks for your kind comment re I Lift Up My Eyes. Usually when I'm sitting here working on the 'puter I can simply glance up and see Pikes Peak in all its glory - not today - completely obliterated by smoke. Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 3:58:00 PM

Merci, Bob. Be grateful you are not here. We have smoke day and night. Loss of homes, lives animals. Your Pke will come back here we have losr people and homes. As I said, it's depressing, Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2020 2:12:00 PM

Nothing beats sitting out on a warm summers evening letting your mind wander Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2020 2:17:00 PM

You got that right.... Thanks Tom Pangie xx