Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest Poetry Contest

I want to make myself clear,
So all might understand
I'll try to pen something here.

Something that's not bland.
I pick up my pen with a flourish.
To try to make a stand.

Thirty minutes later,
The pen's still in my hand
Poised over the paper

Ignoring my command
The pen would not flow
Should I unhand

The pen
And let it lie low
Amen.

Amen, indeed
Wake up, muse and write
A great read

One that inspires all to think
Is, what I need
Before I sink

Into oblivion,
As I state the obvious
With good reason





23 April 2021
Just Stating The Obvious Poetry Contest Poetry Contest
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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Shirley! Blessings, Kim M
Hawkins Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Kim. Always a surprise to me to receive such lovely comments from other poets... Hope you are having a happy week... Shirley
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Shirley.
Hawkins Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:08 PM
Thank you Eve, For your encouraging comments and support on my simple poetry, it is much appreciated. Hope all is as well as can be for you and yours...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Imagine what a masterpiece you would have written if your Muse was not asleep! Hahaha! A wonderful, witty, and inspiring poem, dearest Shirley. Blessings
Hawkins Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:20 PM
I think my muse suffers with constant tiredness and the brain has the same affliction. It was lovely to hear from you Demetrios, Thank you for generous comments. Blessings to you and your family.
Buehler Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:05 PM
I enjoyed the wit and humor of this poem so much. I think it'll be a winner-good luck! :D
Hawkins Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:28 PM
So pleased that you enjoyed reading the poem, Evelyn. Thank you, for your encouraging comments. I hope you are having a pleasant day. Best wishes to you and yours... Shirley
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