Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

How fast our childhood goes.
It starts out like a tiny stream,
then like a river flows.

This river which is life
will carry us perhaps to college.
Most become a husband or a wife.

Once married, we want more!
We work and save so we can have
the things that we adore.

Such different things folk dream of, yet
so many things the same
are what most people get!

A house with a fence, perhaps a tree
in our front yard, and then
kids come. We are a family.

Running, running, life goes on
with twists and turns. 
One day we see it’s almost gone.

Just stating the obvious am I.
We race through life like rivers,
and then we die.

April 30, 2021 for Brother Jacob's Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest
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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 3:22 PM
So true, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:08 PM
Reminds me of a popular Snoopy cartoon ‘some day we will all die Snoopy’ ~ ‘true but on all other days we will not!’ ~ congrats on your win, Andrea
Daniel Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 9:02 PM
True, many of us live our lives without realizing God's purpose for us... congratulations on your win, Andrea:)
Evans Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 1:48 PM
So, so true. Most everybody's life journey. At least, ours is kind of different in a way for we can always roam in our creative minds and let our imagination soar. Congrats, Andrea. Well done.
Dutta Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Journey of Life is so Obvious. Congratulation to win Just to mention: Tanka n Acrostic, both are my favorite forms and I love to rhyme.
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Andrea.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:12 AM
'Tis true, Andrea, tho' the third stanza was my other half--and that was true, my compliments on another 1st Place win my friend, Aloha!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 8:40 AM
A fantastic write Andrea, congratulations on your win… Belle
Mcintosh Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 5:45 AM
So true... don't waste a moment! love this. CONGRATS!!! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:47 PM
We know this now "We race through life like rivers," Great job!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Life cycle is mostly predictable. Itt is our coice to make it happy.
Y. Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:59 PM
Wow! Andrea, You penned an excellent entry for the contest. You told the circle of life in your well-written piece. Congratulations in advance. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
Hankins Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 11:37 AM
So true and well-stated, Andrea. GL in the contest.
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