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Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

How fast our childhood goes. It starts out like a tiny stream, then like a river flows. This river which is life will carry us perhaps to college. Most become a husband or a wife. Once married, we want more! We work and save so we can have the things that we adore. Such different things folk dream of, yet so many things the same are what most people get! A house with a fence, perhaps a tree in our front yard, and then kids come. We are a family. Running, running, life goes on with twists and turns. One day we see it’s almost gone. Just stating the obvious am I. We race through life like rivers, and then we die. April 30, 2021 for Brother Jacob's Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/20/2021 3:22:00 PM
So true, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/19/2021 10:08:00 PM
Reminds me of a popular Snoopy cartoon ‘some day we will all die Snoopy’ ~ ‘true but on all other days we will not!’ ~ congrats on your win, Andrea
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Date: 5/18/2021 9:02:00 PM
True, many of us live our lives without realizing God's purpose for us... congratulations on your win, Andrea:)
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Date: 5/18/2021 1:48:00 PM
So, so true. Most everybody's life journey. At least, ours is kind of different in a way for we can always roam in our creative minds and let our imagination soar. Congrats, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:37:00 AM
Journey of Life is so Obvious. Congratulation to win Just to mention: Tanka n Acrostic, both are my favorite forms and I love to rhyme.
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Andrea.
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:12:00 AM
'Tis true, Andrea, tho' the third stanza was my other half--and that was true, my compliments on another 1st Place win my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 5/18/2021 8:40:00 AM
A fantastic write Andrea, congratulations on your win… Belle
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Date: 5/18/2021 5:45:00 AM
So true... don't waste a moment! love this. CONGRATS!!! God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:47:00 PM
We know this now "We race through life like rivers," Great job!
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Date: 4/30/2021 10:24:00 PM
Life cycle is mostly predictable. Itt is our coice to make it happy.
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:59:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, You penned an excellent entry for the contest. You told the circle of life in your well-written piece. Congratulations in advance. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2021 11:37:00 AM
So true and well-stated, Andrea. GL in the contest.
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