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enabled now for co-creation our free will chooses either blissful joy or agitation within vibrant void of stillness ego thoughts rested that that is is bliss in fullness clues abound we see them not as each breath renews fickle attention in fears fraught we shine bright as love and light bewildered by shadows delusion veiling wrong from right looking in within what do we see attachments fleeting stagnation therein cause of ennui identity dissolves in joy continuum desire births anxiety soul free devoid of ego residuum life a flow not a fixed coordinate yet we fuel passion oblivious to bliss pulse that elates be to become at ease as the breeze unfettered unbound celebrating in embrace and release 17-April-2021 ‘Just stating the obvious poetry contest’ poetry contest Sponsor: Brother Jacob 8-tercets, with 1st & 3rd line rhyming

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Date: 5/20/2021 4:16:00 PM
Well written, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/20/2021 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 5/18/2021 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Unseeking Seeker.
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Date: 5/20/2021 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/18/2021 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations Seeker on a worthy win for my contest! God bless you and have a wonderful day! (: - Jacob
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Date: 5/18/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Brother Jacob! :)