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Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

enabled now for co-creation
our free will chooses
either blissful joy or agitation

within vibrant void of stillness 
ego thoughts rested
that that is is bliss in fullness

clues abound we see them not
as each breath renews
fickle attention in fears fraught

we shine bright as love and light
bewildered by shadows
delusion veiling wrong from right

looking in within what do we see
attachments fleeting
stagnation therein cause of ennui

identity dissolves in joy continuum 
desire births anxiety
soul free devoid of ego residuum

life a flow not a fixed coordinate
yet we fuel passion
oblivious to bliss pulse that elates

be to become at ease as the breeze
unfettered unbound 
celebrating in embrace and release 

17-April-2021

‘Just stating the obvious poetry contest’ poetry contest
Sponsor: Brother Jacob

8-tercets, with 1st & 3rd line rhyming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Well written, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Kim!
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Unseeking Seeker.
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Eve!
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