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Just Stating the Obvious

When all is well:
love lasts, adventure winks, and flesh is wrinkle-free —
no one thinks of hell.

Hands touch and lips express,
untortured by death;
the sun and moon do bless.

Yellow tennis balls in motion.
Muscles on court, in sea —
Sunset and sunrise by the ocean.

The morning news and puzzles shared.
Just the sight, scent and glory of his wife.
Warm coffee and blankets show they cared.

When all is well,
before you blink and it is finished,
there was a time, for your story, to tell.

He didn’t mind sharing her ills,
cleaning up after chemo,
the ominous spills.

It’s obvious that we must die.
Often it comes as a smack.
Why to ourselves, do we lie?

On our deathbed we succumb.
It is ghastly to see one corpsed.
Out of our lover’s arms we must come.

4/29/2021
Just Stating The Obvious
Sponsor: Brother Jacob
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Such a sad piece, but well written! Congrats on your 1st place win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Superb write, Kim! Body dies, spirit is eternal. Congrats on your win!
Evans Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Congrats, Kim. Everything is temporary, so while you have them, be thankful and show caring and loving for we don't know until when we could have them. Very meaningful poem. Have a great afternoon.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:34 PM
No matter what you think and even when you think you give it thought, reality comes knocking. Thank you, Marilene!
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 11:04 PM
Sad and heartfelt. However people die more from hart problems than cancer. It makes no difference. We pray for their souls to find peace. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:51 AM
Yes, we do. My Dad had a triple bypass this year too! Hugs, dear friend.
Seeker Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Beautiful write Kim! each breath inhalation life, each exhalation death, very few can let go in the end
Rodrigues Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:53 AM
I’m working on peace and asking God for ways to promote a positive vibe for my Dad. The love of his life has gone away. Blessings.
Y. Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:37 PM
WoW! Kim, What a touching and heartfelt entry for the contest. This reads like you're talking about your dear mother and father. It's a good contender for the contest. Best wishes in the contest.PS, My prayers go out to you and your family. Thanks for stopping by my page- Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:56 PM
It is about them. Thank you, Alexis <3
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