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Just Stating the Obvious

Clear as black and white, they say, In Occam’s razor slashing terms, Exempting endless hues of gray. Despite spotless reputation, “The Obvious”, on occasion - Subject to interpretation. Findings depend on where we look, How far we venture to explore Beyond the cover of the book. The most erroneous of all - Character sketch at a quick glance - An eye assessment of one’s soul. Through the prism of closed mind’s sight A premature line is drawn, Assuming either black or white. Unless we deeply delve within We scratch the surface of what seems, While substance lies beneath the skin. Hard proven facts one can’t deny, Nevertheless, each story holds Second, eye opening blind side. “Stating the Obvious” I deem, Unless they're clearly black and white, Things are not always what they seem. April 17, 2021 Contest : Just Stating The Obvious Sponsor: Brother Jacob

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Date: 5/20/2021 3:24:00 PM
So true, Margarita! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/19/2021 10:10:00 PM
True that! Congrats on your win with wise words of wisdom, Margarita!
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Date: 5/18/2021 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Margarita.
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Date: 5/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Margarita, thing’s aren't always as they seem, many times we are deceived other times delightedly pleased… Belle
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Date: 4/21/2021 9:42:00 PM
So very true, Margarita. This is worthy of a win!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/4/2021 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. M.
Date: 4/19/2021 11:49:00 AM
Your fifth verse is indeed a winner!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/4/2021 7:07:00 AM
It's time they start judging by the stanza, numbered :) M.
Date: 4/19/2021 5:43:00 AM
Bravo, Margarita ~ lovely poem with depth.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/19/2021 1:30:00 PM
Thank you, Line. M.

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