Just Something I'D Like To Say

to accomplish a want 
first must make a goal
a goal making your want reachable
effective goals form a habbit
a habbit forms a character 
the character then forms a unbreakable soul
a soul that focuses on what it desires
and not what others desire
letting know one bring it down
it sets and records achievements 
taking risks without taking advantages
needing only its self to accomplish goals
in order to reach a goal
a step must be thought out
going step by step is the key to success
treating life as if it were ment to be lived in a thousand ways
finding your own path and being committed to that path
taking endless taunts and stabs and still being able keep a strong mind
letting nothing turn you down and make you feel like you dont deserve it
working hard to push your goals to your long term goal
using the arts of short term goals to gradually progress in the direction your final goal
like climbing a mountain to the very top
and once reaching the top of that mountian 
you climb the next one
and the one after that
never giving up and never second thoughts
shouting for victory and moving forward
and weaving through every obstical on the way to your goal
finishing strong and living your own way is how you become an individual
pushing yourself forward without falling back
beings its own leader instead of following others
you and you only can determine who you really are
nobody can say who you are or tell you who you are
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/25/2010 11:04:00 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Devon. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:05:00 AM
Very true!!! Good job!!! Keep writing! thank you for your comment! I can't wait to read more! -Courtney-
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Devon..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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