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Inspired by the penultimate line of Sunlite Wanter's, "The Old Poet" (Feb. 17, 2019)

Just Sling 'Em

Straight
        from the
    Heart, sling 'em 
     Forget all that
    meter, metaphor 
 and rhyme...just sling
     'em from your
       pure Heart
         Straight
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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:51 PM
There would be less war if more poetry was encouraged in schools because of the cathartic way poetry has of healing emotional wounds. An endearing poem Gershon. I hope it is a winner for you if for a contest. I have been away and it is great to be back reading your words. : )
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Thank you, Connie. Really appreciate your warm words of encouragement here... A modified version of this poem, in lanterne format, is entered in Bobby May's 'winner' contest. Best wishes, Gershon
Y. Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Hi Gershon, At the end of the day all that really matters is did it come "straight from the heart" I see that's where your poetry comes from. I say to you keep on "slinging " my friend:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:25 PM
I will keep on slinging :-)
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Thanks, Alexis. And it takes a 'slinger' to recognize another one. So you keep on slinging too! :) gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Sheer Awesomeness. <3
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:43 PM
Thanks for the heartbeat. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 10:40 PM
I am hoping that you teach poetry, for this is PERFECT advice! BRAVO! Trixie and I are both clapping and hooting for this one.
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Well, thanks for your faith in my teaching ability. If you were the principal/director where I work, perhaps I would be teaching poetry. Oh, well. Thank Trixie for me, Caren--and THANK YOU too. Best wishes, gw
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