Just Sitting

Tone was a big fella, 
but this toilet was so huge he could swing his legs,
When sat in the position of eternal contemplation, 
He swung them,
back,
forward,
back,
forward,
For a moment he was lost,
then he got back down to business.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 27, 2010 at 3:15 PM
cool idea on the toilet seen, nice one,..p.d.
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