Just Sayin' Show Dont Tell

sans verbs,verse may.....SHOW some may do,but others...DON'T help,our haiku.................TELL Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/5/2021 7:20:00 AM

fun way to get the message across ~

Brian Strand
Date: 9/6/2021 12:27:00 AM

Hopefully so Line..one cannot always tell

Date: 9/5/2021 4:12:00 AM

Thank you so much for this informative write Brian... God bless... ~ Ani

Brian Strand
Date: 9/5/2021 6:20:00 AM

Thats how I judge a hiku Kim,..pure& simple the Japanese way ,...can't get out of the habit from studying their masters thereof.

Date: 9/4/2021 10:25:00 AM

Very well said, imagery is important. Thank you for all the inspiring contest. Hugs Eve

Brian Strand
Date: 9/4/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Eve,it is the key to being a poet.

Date: 9/4/2021 4:47:00 AM

Don't see your poetry as much as i would like Brian, but what i do see always leaves an impression. Thank you.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/4/2021 5:22:00 AM

I post everyday Harry,thanks for your kind observation