Just Sayin' Show Dont Tell

sans verbs,verse may.....SHOW

some may do,but others...DON'T

help,our haiku.................TELL

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Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:20 AM
fun way to get the message across ~
Strand Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:27 AM
Hopefully so Line..one cannot always tell
Jayasankar Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 4:12 AM
Thank you so much for this informative write Brian... God bless... ~ Ani
Strand Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thats how I judge a hiku Kim,..pure& simple the Japanese way ,...can't get out of the habit from studying their masters thereof.
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Very well said, imagery is important. Thank you for all the inspiring contest. Hugs Eve
Strand Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Eve,it is the key to being a poet.
Horsman Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Don't see your poetry as much as i would like Brian, but what i do see always leaves an impression. Thank you.
Strand Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 5:22 AM
I post everyday Harry,thanks for your kind observation
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