Just Sayin

You’re hiding in the shadows,
 your voice is full of scorn,
your thoughts fragmented windows,
 your life a chess master’s pawn.

You think you know the answers,
 you very seldom concede,
you never accept the equation,
 you don’t notice when you bleed.

You laugh in the face of discretion,
 you constantly refuse advice,
you shut out the people you know,
 you roll their worth with dice.

You’re the solution to the problem,
 you’re the knife to the steel,
when will you finally understand
 your scars will never heal?

       
             

      Written: circa 1993
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Trestrail Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Sounds like someone I know. Jus sayin!
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Ah, the darkness is in sync with the times, Craig. 'Peel the skin' and find an even deeper dark. ~ To the Ocean's Bottom
Maverick Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 1:06 PM
Better a healing word than a wounding one Thoughts ensue as I ponder Thanks for posting Craig.'
Alex Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 10:10 PM
"you don’t notice when you bleed" - So beautiful. Every sentence is a poem in itself. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:41 PM
that's DEEP!!!
Mcconnell Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Nice penning Craig, lovely rhyme and flow with insightfulness. Blessings,Gordon
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 6:05 AM
I hope you have helped him find a counselor to work through all his problems. If a person doesn't know how they are coming across to others, then they think everything is just hunky-dory. Thanks for dropping by my page. I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting on my work. Sara
Hankins Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 12:31 PM
Hmmm...If he did, I wonder how he must have felt reading this poem. Hmmm...I suspect he attributed it to someone he knew.
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