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Just Pollution

Smile echos joy ,heart suffers...quietly in pain. A desire of thoughts to silence,but the soul calls your name. Just pushing through the day trying to remain sain. The eyes no life,the lips no words.The pulse beats no longer. Drifting farther into death,emotions they've wondered. floating on red tide as i ponder. thinking..what went wrong,head resting upon drift wood, Should of known better than to offer damaged goods.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/21/2010 8:34:00 AM
interesting!
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Date: 12/15/2009 10:58:00 AM
this is really amazing....i relate to it really well too...thank you for sharing xo Rain
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Date: 9/22/2009 5:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Rebecca. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:10:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Like the last line. Sara
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